Nov 30, 2012

Romantic advice required version 2

Based on various bits if feedback I've made some changes to the "Gottlob's story"  short story in Good stuff. I thought people might be interested in this, so I've highlighted the changes in the text. Many thanks for the input, I think it has definitely improved it. 
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  1. Kate8/12/12

    With a look back to the original schedule may I presume that the silence here is due to the fact that you are right in the middle of chapter 1?

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